Common writer mistakes #10

Welcome back to another Common Writer Mistakes! This time is over: #10 - Adding too many commas Lately, I've had a few authors use commas to add detail after detail onto a sentence. But they don't realize how jam-packed the sentence becomes. Here are two fictional examples: Laurence came through the door, looking for answers, … Continue reading Common writer mistakes #10

Common writer mistakes #9

Welcome back to another Common Writer Mistakes! This time is over: #9 - Overusing character names Lately, I've seen a few writers overuse character names. They would use a name almost every chance they could. Here's a fictional example: John walked over to Laurencia with the biggest smile on his face. He turned with his … Continue reading Common writer mistakes #9

Common writer mistakes #8

Welcome back to another Common Writer Mistakes! This time is over: #8 - The Words "Felt" and "Feel" No matter what POV you write in, you're going to come across the word "felt" or "feel" at some point. These words are sometimes glossed over without realizing the potential that could be brought to the story … Continue reading Common writer mistakes #8

Common writer mistakes #7

Welcome back to another Common Writer Mistakes! This time is over: #7 - Not Developing Characters I'm sure we've all come across a character in a book who we didn't feel anything towards much. We weren't worried for the character's well-being. Which doesn't help us want to continue reading. It can take many drafts to … Continue reading Common writer mistakes #7

Common writer mistakes #6

Welcome back to another Common Writer Mistakes! This time is over: #6 - Unnecessary details The plot is coming along. We're getting to an important moment — but wait! I forgot to mention something. Let me write it down, because it's important. But now the reader is wondering why I stopped to describe something in … Continue reading Common writer mistakes #6

Common writer mistakes #5

Welcome back to another Common Writer Mistakes! This time is over: #5 - Misusing hyphens Besides the "gray" with an a vs "grey" with an e battle, there's one common spelling error that I've noticed while editing: hyphens. Sometimes writers believe the word needs a hyphen when it doesn't. Or they forget the hyphen when … Continue reading Common writer mistakes #5

Common writer mistakes #4

#4 - Common misused words We type a single word. It's spelled correctly. Microsoft Word isn't flagging it either. It sounds right too! But 'I love that Disney fairy tail' doesn't quite sound right. It can get more complicated than that. There are long lists of words that we think we know but we don't. … Continue reading Common writer mistakes #4

One big tip for knowing how you’ve gotten a good editor

Editing is essential. As writers, we all need some type of editing. Even me, who is trained in editing, is not the best editor for my own work. There are mistakes that our brains cannot find in our stories, our children. So, editors become our biggest helpers. What's great is that some editors will give … Continue reading One big tip for knowing how you’ve gotten a good editor

Common writer mistakes #3

#3 - Repeating words for emphasis In some cases, repeating words helps. "Please, Elie," I begged. "You have to do this. You know how much it means to me. Please." See how the 'please' is repeated? It didn't seem to overdo the dialogue, because it was separated out by two full sentences. It felt smooth, … Continue reading Common writer mistakes #3

Book review – This Splintered Silence

"I think most things begin to fracture without anyone realizing it’s even happening, a sort of splintered silence that gives way all at once under too much weight, and without warning." Title: This Splintered Silence Author: Kayla Olson Genre: Sci-fi, Mystery Pages: 368 pages Publication date: November 13, 2018 Publisher: HarperTeen I knew I had … Continue reading Book review – This Splintered Silence