We’ve all heard the saying show, don’t tell. Even as I edit, I find instances where I need to point that out. However, telling does have a purpose. It’s about how you use it. And perhaps understanding it more will help writers understand when and when not to use it.
There are two main concepts where telling can work:
Skip to important Scenes
Every scene should drive the plot forward. We don’t need to see the character getting coffee or sitting through traffic. Unless something major happened, write a few telling sentences and skip to the next important thing.
Telling the story’s foundation in a few sentences works as well. Many stories start with a telling sentence about the setting. Sometimes it helps to sneak in a few lines of backstory through a few telling sentences as well.
These aren’t the only ways it can work, but they are the two main ways I’ve seen it done well.
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