I wanted the world to say hello
But all I got was time taken away
Until I turned into nothing more
Than the sand beneath the world’s feet
Copyright © Robin LeeAnn
I wanted the world to say hello
But all I got was time taken away
Until I turned into nothing more
Than the sand beneath the world’s feet
Copyright © Robin LeeAnn
Robin LeeAnn 
WOW! That is beautiful.
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure. 🙏
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love it
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I love how this piece captures that elusive thing called time. I was reminded of an hourglass in the final line yet also felt a sense of regret!
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it.
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Love …. I am nominating you for an award soon!
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Oh, that’s awesome! Thank you so much!
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It’s posted:)
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So deep and meaningful.
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Thank you!
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My pleasure
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Oh this is very sad. I hope it’s not true for you, but it’s certainly true for some people. Sensitive writing.
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Beautifully written, solemn, and poignantly, it’s like a reflection. Time consumes us greatly especially with experiences that showcase our accomplishments, struggles, and losses. You capture that grief quite well!
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Thank you!
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Oh I REALLY relate to this one Robin LeeAnn.m a wonderful poem
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Thank you so much!
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Sometimes brevity is best. This is the case with your piece. Succint and well expressed. Kevin
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Thank you so much!
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